Okay, so, I wasn’t sure about this one, but thought I’d post it anyway.
I do not actually know all the technical terms for describing poetry or verses and so forgive me if this sounds a bit dense, but the part I’m specifically not sure about is the word ‘theories’ and how it works alongside ‘stories’.
Anyway, here it is π
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Twists, turns,
And hard-won gloriesβ¦
Rewarded triumphs,
And allegoriesβ¦
Proven myths,
And shattered theoriesβ¦
Thus are wrought
Our famous stories.
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Thanks for stopping by and constructive/polite comments always welcome.
Ro x
You should totally be sure about this one because it rocks.
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Hey! Thank you so much for reading, following my blog, and for the compliment! Means a lot π Good to meet you – off to check out your writings now π
Ro x
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You’re welcome π
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I really like the slightly oxymoronic quality of “proven myths”, and the way it then contrasts with “shattered stories.” π
As for the stories/theories part, the rhyme is not a full one, but that doesn’t matter – it doesn’t always have to be. π Especially since Glories/allegories is not a full rhyme either π A lot of famous poets use half rhymes. The actual content/meaning of the poem is more important, in my opinion π
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That’s true, it doesn’t always have to be. I need to get out of that mindset – when I write poems, I either entirely don’t rhyme them or I feel they HAVE to rhyme ‘properly’ haha…thank you π π
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