So in the whirlwind of travelling I am neglecting this blog – not good! I promised I wouldn’t, but the days slip by so fast, and then suddenly I realise I’ve not posted in over a MONTH?! Many, many apologies…
Unforgivable.
Here’s a poem to disperse the tumbleweed.
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Loving words roll off a lilting tongue,
Slipping him sweetly into her waiting arms.
He is floating, feeling forgiven, and is
Entirely oblivious
To her waiting gun.
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I hope after this one in turn to post a sequel from mum’s point of view to this and then one of those awesome 50 word stories I keep seeing cropping up here and there. At least a post a week. There, I’ve committed now! I will try super hard to stick to the plan!
Thanks so much for stopping by. Suggestions / comments on this one especially welcome as still in draft form. At some point (e.g. a year after commencing blog, like an anniversary thing) will accumulate draft poems and do a post of improved versions 🙂
Ro x
This poem flowed in such a deliciously evil manner. I love it 😀
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Now why doesn’t that surprise me 😉 thanks v much for the comment 😀
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Loved the ending twist! A surprise gun always adds a bit of welcome spice (to fictional pieces, of course!) 😉
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Hahahaha thank you! Yep they do 😀
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