Poem draft: ‘Confidence’

She would have liked to have lived

as she dreamed, deemed as brave

awake as in slumber,

As wise in day as in darkness,

As sure of intent and as pure of heart

as her subconscious counterpart

but alas! She lacked

not these virtues, nor good sense,

she simply had not the

Confidence.

Playing around / experimenting πŸ™‚ thanks for stopping by!

Ro x

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3 thoughts on “Poem draft: ‘Confidence’

  1. Really liked the fresh rhymes of “heart” and “her subconcious counterpart” and then “sense” and “confidence.” 😊 You’re really good at adjusting the rhythm so that by the time we get to the last line, the single word “confidence” sounds just right! 😊

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    1. Thanks very much indeed πŸ™‚ Haha I constantly whisper read out loud the lines until I can clap to them. Erm does that make sense?! And woo! New photo! I like πŸ˜€

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